I'm quite new, can't figure out how I can better serve people and in turn, can earn a good revenue.
It needs some basic revision to eliminate errors.
For starters, the tag line
"Changing the way how online businesses perform..."
ought to be either "the way" or "how" – not both.
Even so, that's a bit vague. Rather than hire an editor, hire a writer. I'm not cheap, but I'd do it for you if you were in the market to hire a specialist.
I think your profile looks fine. To get customers you will need to reach out and answer questions on Clarity as well as going to groups that need your services and commenting everywhere they need your services, every forum etc. out there.
I separate thought is I have a Podcast called "IncomeForBabyBoomers.com and if I placed an ad for your services on my website in exchange for getting my a bunch of listens that would be great. The Podcast is new but I'm interviewing some very powerful people. I just interviewed the Chairman of the board for BNI network and he did 3 Billion dollars in business last year. Let me know if you would be interested in speaking about such an arrangement, thanks...I hope this has helped....Ken Queen
If I were you, I would certainly add images to your "Areas of Expertise" that are listed.
I would also do free calls and get reviews.
I would also optimize your bio/profile for the keywords you want to rank for.
Best of luck!