James Altucher calls me "the 2nd best copywriter he knows".
And yes, in full disclosure, he is my husband. He is also a twice WSJ best-seller author and ultra successful entrepreneur.
The "first copywriter title" goes to Mike Palmer.
I studied with Mike, and I am one of the few lucky people to have him as personal mentor. He reads my copy and gives me feedback sometimes.
While Mike will cost a HUGE amount of money (as it should), I've yet to be properly "discovered", other than by James...
So this is your chance. Now you know.
My expertise is to get to the point of your message, then say it in plain English.
Seems easy, but I see lots of web-pages out there where I can't, for the love of God, tell what they are about.
Actually, let me just give you some ideas, just follow these 3:
1- Tell me what you do on the front page and in plain English.
2- Place a video, so I can see you. But it has to have good copy.
3- Cover the four Us. What is the (1) "urgent problem", why are you (2) "unique" and not like the other million people who do it, why are you (3) "useful" (testimonials help) and what is your (4) "ultra specific offer" how long will it take me? how much does it cost? is it refundable? why is this the best deal ever.